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Frightened light,
Betrays my sight,
A victim just like me.

In the air,
I smell you near,
Lurking patiently.

Out from the dark,
Movements start,
To play with my mind.

I change my pace,
And try to trace,
The door I cannot find.

These pleasure/pain,
Torture games,
Abuse my beating heart.

I - the model,
Your eyes do follow,
To feed your favorite art.

Stepping through,
I move to you,
Your gesture so enticing.

A whip in leather,
'Cuffs and feather,
"Lets be exciting".
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Author's Comments

Kinky...



Made corrupting an innocent mind and 15 minutes of my time.

:iconkophii: <- his fault :heart:

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:iconstormkitten:
Meow! Very nice hon! I like!

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Scream for me and I'll purr for you...
:iconxxraven21xx:
wooh. very kinky! ;p

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with this candle, i will light you way in darkness.
with this hand i will lift your sorrows.
your cup will never empty, for i will be you wine.
with this ring i ask you to be mine.....

...I do.
:iconcykosis-ag:
Mm, sexy. XD +fave, just because that was pretty good.

--
Science without religion is lame, religion without science is blind.
-Albert Einstein

Cottleston Cottleston Cottleston Pie,
A fly can\'t bird, but a bird can fly.
Ask me a riddle and I will reply:
Cottleston Cottleston Cottleston Pie.
:icongarnet-43:
I like the way you sparcely use your words to cleverly paint the image, leaving just enough to the imagination.

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"And the day came when the risk to remain tight in a bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom." - Anais Nin
:iconcamelchild:
=3

Many thanks darlin' :hug:

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love yourself before you love another...
~
THKR
:iconcamelchild:
It started off as a song, but then I realised it had a different direction. The enigmatic metaphor sentences is beginning to feel like my style =3

Its kinda double edged though; too much mystique feels pretentious in my eyes.

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love yourself before you love another...
~
THKR
:iconcamelchild:
Thank you =3
Thanks for the fav+ too!

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love yourself before you love another...
~
THKR
:iconcamelchild:
=D

I know. When I finished it and looked it over, I was kinda impressed I came up with such a poem! Thanks for the fav+ X3

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love yourself before you love another...
~
THKR
:iconraikoro:
You can express a lot of things with a small amount of words. I like the atmosphere you created ^^ I bet you have put a lot of work in it...this deserves a fav. :)

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